Updated Shot by Shot

Girl 1 - extreme religous parents

Girl 2 - extreme conservative parents

1. Mid shot of girls looking at, each other centre of the shot, side on, no sound track in the fort.
2. Camera moves in on faces and pans down on hands, sound track starts, shot lasts 5 seconds.
3. On the lyric "empty" during silence shot cuts to doorway, three figures, parents and priest standing there, shot lasts 4 seconds.
4. Close up girls faces, smiling, 4 seconds.
5. Over shoulder shot from priest, looking at Girl 1 in bed, Girl 1 scared and shocked, 4 seconds.
6. Extreme close up of girls eyes, 2 second shot 
7. Close up of girl 2 getting tucked, side on, shot for 5 seconds.
8. Close up of pray beads in focus in hands, face in shot by not in focus, 4 seconds.
9. Wide shot of full fort, Girls propped up lying on each other, hold for 6 seconds.
10. Wide shot of Girl 2 in middle of bed, as she scuttle back towards head board, camera zooms out, whole shot 5 seconds.
11. Wide shoot zooms in on one Girl tickling other girl arm, 5 seconds.
12. POV from priest, looking at Girl 1, camera moves to look ar parents, dad nods mum fiddling with cross necklace, 5 seconds.
13. Mid shot of girls still leaning on each other, one girl head on shoulder, laughing, 4 seconds 
14. 6 seconds above shot of close up of Girl 2 arm, arm getting restrained, pushed down struggling. 
15. 2 seconds knot being tried.
16. Mid shot priest crossing himself 4 seconds  
17. Mid shot of dad head tilting up 2 seconds 
18. Mid shot of mum crossing her, while mumbling pray, 2 seconds 
19. Close up of girls eyes and then zoom out of her struggling in bed, 8 seconds.
20. 2 seconds  priest fingers in chalice.
21. 2 seconds of over the shoulder shot of flicking water onto girl.
22. 4 seconds bird eye view close up of little table of cross and bible while priest running finger on bible.
23. side shot close up girl crying looking up, turn face to look camera, 5 seconds, blink then cut 
24. Cut to same position in fort lying on other girl, eyes look up at other girl and camera tilts in POV shot, girl smiles and looks down on her
25. Mid shot girl sobbing, leans in to camera and screams, bird eye view for 5 seconds.
26. 5 seconds of very fast editing of all the shots in flicker sequence.
27. Bird eye shot mid shot, Girl 1 lying in bed, empty dark room, girl staring at ceiling numb, emotionalise and exhausted, 5 seconds.
28. 2 seconds side on mid shot, girls forehead touching, nose touching little smile, 
29. 3 seconds extreme close up of girls 2 lips, smile, says I LOVE YOU.
30. Black screen, 5 seconds, title appears.